Quick start outline

(03-09-19)

Joe in fur, once upon a time... two takes. facing camera, facing away from camera.

"If you could tell yourself something..."

Hideout

we see Christina and hang on her for a bit in surveillance

he leaves, road flowing by (Road = Joe)

Theme song. We establish the boat, Gerry, and Christina getting into her cabin.

Then in close up, we hear Christina singing Veronique

switch to Lena, breaking branches

Joe's voice utters a line. Lena repeats. back and forth.

Then her carrying branches and Joe teaching boxes, boxes appear in fields

Outline

03-02-19

Scene • Carnage Theme Park - Armor staging area at Nuke Waste Repository

Scene • iRock - Surveillance before mission

Scene • Uncle Joe's Hideout - Context

Scene • Bicycle Ejaculation - Arming security at the hideout

Scene • Activate Hideout Security - Femur is pulled in

ALT Scene • Joe Traveling A

Scene • Post Apocalyptic Chardash - Flashes of extrapolation to come

Scene • Show Theme FUDIP - Opening Credits + Christina, Gerry and the Big Boat

Scene • Apocalyptic Diversion A

Scene • Paul's Pype - The Fungus Box Fusion

Scene • Apocalyptic Diversion B

Scene • Collapsing wave functions to Slam - Christina in her cabin with bubble wrap

Scene • People's Poetry Slam - Christina re-remembers

Scene • Collapsing wave functions to Fire - Christina in her cabin with bubble wrap

Scene • Ring! - Christina is brought back abruptly

Scene • Hello - A re-memory of meeting Roger, the ET

Scene • But... you're Dead - Raising a significant objection

Scene • Just Open the Door - Hero's invitation 1/3

Scene • Best Scenario Yet - Childhood promise

Scene • Creaky - what's waiting for her out there...

ACT I

Scene • Can I Come In? - Hero's invitation 2/3

Scene • Check It Out - Joe inserts magic disc

Scene • That's him - Hero's invitation 3/3, "Now?!"

Scene • Apocalyptic Diversion C

Scene • Date Dance - recapitulating consumer tropes with costume

Scene • At Gerry's Door - In the hallway, about to knock

Scene • Grown Up Ghost - Reading PKD to young Christina

Scene • ACT II

Scene • I've been sent by God...

Scene • We Just Have To - Christina at a loss

Scene • Joe Traveling 1/3

Scene • It's God

Scene • Apocalyptic Diversion D

Scene • Joe Traveling 2/3

Scene • Apocalyptic Diversion E

Scene •  Joe Traveling 2/3

Scene • Do It Again

Scene • Credits

Scene • Boxes Display Christina
"Now be all boxes. Even smarter. Gerry inside box. Keep Christina Safe."

Scene Spook Office - Uncle Joe, I haven't seen him in days

Scene • This Is Your Uncle Joe

Scenes Inventory

Apocalyptic Diversions

  • Heros (4-5)
  • Scene • Post Apocalyptic Chardash (snippets of the above plus)
    • Scene • Return of the Saurians (Joe traveling)
    • Scene • Empire State (leaning in water, skyline under ice?!)
    • Scene • Abrams silhouette (gorgeous tank in sunset, prayer flags in silhoutte, bird landing in silhouette on barrel. or maybe with dragon or terradactyl flyby?)
    • Scene • Saucers face-planted in field with dunes in the distance. Old farmer, "this works pretty good, made it myself." holds home made device with hand lettering "scalar weapon".
    • Scene • skeletal hand with credit cards and a box of twinkies
    • Scene • Melted Cityscape (Skyscrapers like candles, homage to Planet of the Apes sequels. Clay on foam armatures.)
    • Scene • Tsunami Aftermath (Container Ship wreckage with Big Boat) Longer hold, then in the background of big boat
    • Scene • Breakthrough. Something Uncle Joe said to her. We will save the world. You will save the world. Anything else we need to say?

Christina Flashbacks / Re-memories

Joe Traveling

 

Alternate Starts

Scene • Carnage Theme Park - Armor staging area at Nuke Waste Repository

Scene • Uncle Joe's Hideout - Surveillance before mission

Scene • Bicycle Ejaculation - Arming security at the hideout

Scene • Apocalyptic Chardash - Flashes of extrapolation to come

Scene • Show Theme FUDIP - Opening Credits + Christina, Gerry and the Big Boat

Scene • Apocalyptic Diversion A

Scene • Paul's Pype - The Fungus Box Fusion

Scene • Apocalyptic Diversion B

Scene • Collapsing wave functions to Slam - Christina in her cabin with bubble wrap

Scene • People's Poetry Slam - Christina re-remembers

Scene • Collapsing wave functions to Fire - Christina in her cabin with bubble wrap

Scene • Ring! - Christina is brought back abruptly

Ancient Origins

Email reply to Chris Carden from 10/05, Christina character development [expect_extraordinary]

 Daughter of God Version 0.9, Misdirection. Several vignettes wrapped up like a burrito.

Life as game vision [life_as_game]

Plans

Screener in 5 days

  • Feel the meta flow, the whole story - outline
  • What's available now?
    • All the tested scenes
  • What could be available in 2-3 days?
    • Iteration 1!
    • Christina in chair reboot
    • Uncle Joe's voice over for People's Poetry Slam
    • Gerry's props
    • Miniatures
    • Blue-Ray printer tray
    • Paul's Pype?
    • Letter to Cannes for translation
    • Credits

Screener in 10 days

2nd pass

  • Amp up scene completion and supporting production
    • miniatures
    • Gerry's props
    • drone footage
    • seeking voice actors (Mel, Em, Joe, Lena, Craigs)
    • set construction - compost bins
    • essential proof of concepts - paul's pype, reaper
  • slam together inventory!
  • insert the latest versions of as many scenes as I can find
  • insert slug text where the scene does not yet exist

1st pass

  • √ slam together a timing edit with whatever we gots!
  • 30+ minutes, what to do?
  • √ find media, where is Ada B b-roll?
  • √identify more movie - Signals from a Nearby Now
  • design new scenes for iteration Two

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