Posts by dan from why.movie

Exposition balance – How much detail is needed about the situation, technology, laws, etc, for the audience to understand what is at stake for the characters? True for any genre, the audience must have enough fluency about the premise or scenario without being overwhelmed or bored by minute esoterica. What’s the sweet spot between mystery…

Novella [11/8/22] riff on Elon Flashbacks Grown Up Ghost Best Scenario Yet Joe’s parting speech to the Clique Prompt – cargo cult and luxury travel mashup Canyon Princess mining script-synopsis-v4/ christina-prequel-questions/

and the notes

https://why.movie/2019/10/01/scene-%e2%80%a2-veronique-enters-rl/ we two are one

see Entheogenic Realm notes about Ralph Bakshi’s Wizards, here Joe applies his new knowing, while keeping in his hip pocket the old fuckery. It’s not that he isn’t transformed, it’s just that he retains the full palette of action. Is trauma the cure for trauma, by presenting Veronique with her fears, she is able to…

the hero’s journey (on a dirt bike) [plant the seed, poof! big bike. ride the ride with sparkles] Here’s the Wizards moment, when the transformed more lovable loving Joe faces the horror of his own arrogance, a force more stifling than the Clique, the abandoned and abused child, the latch key left alone little girl.…

Joe and Box fall in love, and what does the eternal Clique double agent realize? Is there a scene where he’s lying naked with She Box, as if they have just had sex? Maybe he’s smoking a joint? Maybe she’s smoking too? Speech.

many traveling sequences, how are they dffferentiated biking to the Mothers spreading the oral history seeking She Box travel to the Hallucinogenic Realm

Burning boxes and a distress call. How to depict the establishment of the oral tradition enough so we feel Joe is surprised when it’s perverted? Scene • People’s Poetry Slam V2

Wanderjar to establish an oral tradition