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Fully clothed and illiciting a chorus of screeching protest from the ancient box spring, Gerry climbs onto the bed and assumes the posture, what he refers to as entering launch mode. Lying on his back, his hands resting lightly on his abdomen, he prepares for Olympiad level napping. Gerry empties his mind and attends to…

Joe gets up and tromps into the forest. He stoops down, digs a shallow hole, carefully places the dirt bike upright in the hole with his left hand and sweeps the loose dirt over with his right, patting down the pile. A handful of leaves is arranged artfully over the mound. He squats by the…

In the far distance of the meadow, a giant strides over the horizon towards the cave. Thousands of boxes, linked together and articulating comprise the monster, now rapidly approaching, shaking the ground with each stride. Bits of dust fall from the ceiling of the cave. The woman in the meadow turns and sees the giant…

In the far distance of the meadow, a giant strides over the horizon towards the cave. Thousands of boxes, linked together and articulating comprise the monster, now rapidly approaching, shaking the ground with each stride. Bits of dust fall from the ceiling of the cave. The woman in the meadow turns and sees the giant…

A karst cave with stalactites, stalagmites and soaring connected columns that form a cathedral ceiling. A dripping tunnel, bounded by ancient columns on either side, leads out of the cave into a sunny meadow. There is a woman working in the meadow, digging or harvesting. A steady clock-like plunk and splash seems to mark time.…

Brothers Cazimero 1987,  Come Become Hawaii I bought a 2012 Kubota tractor with a cab, and it came equipped with a CD player. I love CDs, I love physical media actually, and back in the day I was in Hawaii visiting friends who were living there and I bought a bunch of music, including a…

Exposition balance – How much detail is needed about the situation, technology, laws, etc, for the audience to understand what is at stake for the characters? True for any genre, the audience must have enough fluency about the premise or scenario without being overwhelmed or bored by minute esoterica. What’s the sweet spot between mystery…

Novella [11/8/22] riff on Elon Flashbacks Grown Up Ghost Best Scenario Yet Joe’s parting speech to the Clique Prompt – cargo cult and luxury travel mashup Canyon Princess mining script-synopsis-v4/ christina-prequel-questions/

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