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Notes 2025 Chapter 20 Questions
What is Joe’s arc? From the ultimate technocrat to lover? What are the change moments? He finds out how Christina died, that he killed her, the one he was trying to protect, to make invincible. That he orphaned both the daughters. That is his change moment, but from what to what? The weird motivations of…
Read MoreNotes 2025 Chapter Prompt Big Boat
Joe prompts for an introduction to the characters on the Big Boat in the style of a late 20th century TV sitcom complete with catchy theme song. Joe subverts the Box Network with humor. The network acquires an affinity for Joe because he is the most fun, (and fun is the foundation of consciousness.) exposition…
Read MoreScript Maul and Saw
DOG inspired prequels about north western lower michigan and the influx of wealth that overwhelms the local aesthetic. THE SURGEON SURGEON (enters room), Hello I’m Doctor Smeagal. (standing, staring at tablet) I see you’ve been referred to our surgical center by the renowned gender consultant in Traverse City, Chaga Trillium Trout. How can I help…
Read MoreConbits
Conbits, instead of Qbits, Consciousness or Constructs (Con – (latin com) with, together) that have select qualities of consciousness, able to interact wth the self programming universe without collapsing quantum wave functions until a desired state is highly probable, so unique manipulations of space time are possible. next day Consciousness = Computation (conbits) what are…
Read More2025 Open Season notes
Uncle Joe offers a prompt for a vignette that hints at special training for a young girl. Perhaps this vignette is titled simply, “Christina”, “Young Christina”, “Christina Graduates”. Debbie Does Dallas. Christina is the doe. he is thinking about having given her the practice and how that protected her during the wild times. The next…
Read More2025 Chapter Prologue
Blackness. No moon, no stars. From orbit, no glowing electric webs across the night side, dense where technocracy thrummed or stretched thin towards the wilds. On the ground, no glow of distant cities on the horizon, no orange fuzz of sodium street lamps lit. A black without texture, a yawning abyss of black, empty, but…
Read More2025 Chapter Open Season
Blackness. Massive machines thrum through miles of granite, a distant bass drum booms a steady, slow rhythm. Strings of light swirl into a spiral galaxy, tinted phosphorescent green. The galaxy recedes up and to the left, shrinking down to a thin horizontal line. The line blinks, and is now an underscore, a cursor. “here’s one……
Read More2025 Chapter Veronique in HR
Buffallo Joe arrives. Veronique is chopping up meat on a rock. She doesn’t look up. Everything happens in telepathic space V Here you are, at last. (turning to gaze at her entourage) [Clique Delegation] You may go Well, what have you come for? [What do you want? How can I help you?] BJ I am…
Read More2025 Guy on Bike Notes
08/21/25 The ramble about time fits if we can figure out why he tampers with time by teaching or readhing the future. Is this a anti mcguffin, an element that just obfuscates the story, a red herring? A Twin Peaks loose end that’s never sewed up? Homage to David Lynch. 11/24/25 a snippet about establishing…
Read More2025 Chapter Date Dance
Several hours had passed since Joe popped his magic CD out of her laptop and left. He had told her to go seduce the awkward recluse down the hall, “now, immediately”. Christina knew that “now, immediately” referred to her perception, not her actions. He was inviting her to think of the outcome in the past…
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